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I am working on writing a better thesis to better illustrate the points I will make in the essay. Furthermore, I misplaced where I should put periods in regard to after or before the page number, but now I understand what to do. I also forgot to put headers in my essay. Moreover, I am working on writing better topic sentences to prelude my examples in the respective paragraph. Lastly, while I am happy with the structure of my essay, some of my sentences are too wordy and "over-stretched", and I am working on how to write better, more concise sentences. After reviewing my Hamlet essay,I definitely need to proofread it better than I did; there were a couple small mistakes that easily could have been avoided, even though they were not detrimental to the essay. Moreover, I definitely needed to add a stronger thesis statement to better reflect my essay as a whole. Adding a stronger thesis statement would also vastly improve my introduction paragraph which also could have been better. I need to make my introduction paragraph more specific than I did in this essay.
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From my essay, I am happy with my main structure. I feel that I juxtaposed Mr. Darcy and Mr. Collins very well and analyzing their different views of social power. I also feel that I used my quotes effectively, and proved my thesis throughout the essay. Lastly, I liked my use of strong language to better convey my point. However, I need to make my essay longer to provide more room to expand my paragraphs and explore the impications which my conclusion barely does.
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